写作评析
（一）My Brother Likes Monkeys
Look ! This is my small ①brother. It’s name is Ma Jun. He is ②born in 1992. It is ③the year of the monkey④.
My brother likes animals very much. He often goes to the zoo and watch ⑤ the animals on Sundays. His favorite animals are monkeys. In his bedroom, there are many toy monkeys. On the wall you can see many pictures of monkeys. And some of them are ⑥ Sun Wukong.
One day my brother draw ⑦ a picture of my father. oh, look! It’s here. Is ⑧it look like my father? No, it looks like a monkey
（二）My Hobbies
Hello, every one①! My name is Wang Linfeng. I am a student at Yu ying Middle school. I’m in class three, Grade One. Now let me to② tell you something about my hobbies.
I have many hobbies. I like playing Chinese chess very much. I also enjoy swimming. My favourite sport is football③ After the④ school, I play football and ⑤ my classmates.
We often have football matches. In winter, I can skating ⑥. on realice. I can skate very good ⑦ It’s wonderful. I think that playing sport are ⑧ good for our health.
What are your hobbies? Please write and tell me about them⑨.
（三）My English Teacher
Nearly all of my classmates like learning English. Do you know why? I think it’s because we have a very good teacher-Wu ping. ①
Wu ping ②is English teacher. Miss Wu is comes③ from Shanghai. She’s 29.She has big eyes and short hair. She is kind and she always smile④. She is one of the best teachers in our school. She goes to work early every day. Miss Wu is always very busy. she often has many⑤ work to do. She teaches so good⑥. She often tells us to do our homework careful⑦. She asks us to study hard. we often do as she says. She gets on very well with us. Sometimes she teaches us English songs. I’m so lucky to be her student.
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Dear peter:①
I was very pleased to receive your letter②. I would like being③ your penfriend.
My name is Zhang Hua. I am the only child in my family. My parents are all ④teachers. They work very hard. I am in class Three, Grade One. I like studying English and math very much. I like⑤ playing basketball. My favorite food are⑥ dumplings, My school is very⑦ big and very beautiful. I like it very! My classmates and teachers are all friend⑧ to me.
I look forward to knowing more about you. Hope to hear from you soon⑨.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
优秀作品赏析
What do you think of TV shows? Good morning friends, now please listen to my report.
My favorite TV shows are sports shows. I think they’re very exciting. I like game shows, too. I don’t mind sitcoms, but I don’t like talk shows. And I can’t stand soap operas. I think they are too long and too boring. Chen Yan is my best friend. she likes soap opreas very much. She also likes sitcoms .She doesn’t mind talk shows, but she doesn’t like game shows. She says she can’t stand sports shows.
Ok, those are our opinions about TV shows. What do you think of them.
It’s Sunday today. It’s a nice day. Jim’s family are spending their holiday on a small island. They get there early with some nice food and drink. They are enjoying themselves. Look, Jim’s playing with the sand and his parents are drinking and talking happily beside him. Behind them we can see two people lying on the sand and enjoying the sunshine. Some children are swimming in the sea. There are two boys playing with a model ship nearby and two girls playing with a model plane over there. The plane is flying high in the sky. Everyone is having a good time.
Hi, dear friends! Do you know? We have a football team in our class! There are 15 boys in our team. I’m in the team too. I am a striker. Many of us are tall and strong. And we play together very well. I think our team is the best one in our school. We can win any other team in our school. And we want to play against the strongest team in the world, when we grow up. Our favorite football players are David Beckham and Michael Owen. Our favorite football club is Javentus . It’s a famous club in the world. We want to be the first! Oh ,we will play against a team from No 2 middle. School on our play ground this afternoon. Would you like to come and watch it?