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2005年锦州市基础教育课程改革实验区初中毕业考试

 

语言知识运用部分(共25分)

  I. 选择填空 从各题的四个选项中选择一个最佳答案,并将其代表字母填到题前括号内(共15分)

( )1. I'll send you ___ to tell you everything when I get to America.

  A. an e-mail   B. a ticket   C. a TV    D. a watch

  ( )2. All the cups are made of glass ___ the green one. It's made of metal.

  A. beside    B. except    C. about    D. with

  ( )3. Jinzhou is becoming more and more beautiful. ___ of tourists come to visit it every year.

  A.Thousand    B. A few    C. Thousands  D. Few

  ( )4. Please ____ the stove (炉灶) after cooking, or it may be dangerous.

  A. turn on    B. turn up   C. turn down  D. turn off

  ( )5. My father liked my picture very much. He was ___ it.

  A. afraid of   B. pleased with   C. worried about   D. angry with

  ( )6. His hobby is ___ swimming ___ skating. It's playing baseball.

  A. either ... or         B. both ... and

  C. not only ... but also     D. neither ... nor

  ( )7. — What's the weather like today?
     — It's ___. What a lovely day! Let's go to climb hills.

  A.   B.   C.   D.

  ( )8. — Sorry, Mr. Green. Jim can't take part in the relay race because he's ill.
      — It doesn't matter. I'l! ask ___ to go instead of him.

  A. somebody else         B. anybody else 

  C. everybody else         D. nobody else

  ( )9. My grandmother likes keeping pets. She said a pet could help a person feel ___.

  A. more nervous   B. alone   C. less lonely   D. terrible

 ( )10. After a day's hard work with her friends in the field, Ann felt she was dead beat. What does "dead beat" mean?

  A. She was dead.          B. She was too tired.

  C. She was beaten by her friends. D. She felt she was the winner.

  ( )11. Liu Xiang won a gold medal (金牌) for the men's 110m hurdles (跨栏) in the 2004 Athens (雅典) Olympics ___.

  A. successfully  B. mostly   C. hardly      D. maybe

  ( )12. — May I speak to John? — ______

  A. Do you know him?         B. Yes, this is John speaking.

  C. Yes, I am John.         D. I'm speaking.

  ( )13. — Hi, young lady! ____?

      — Yes, I' m looking for a Mother's Day's present.

  A. What do you want to do      B. What can I do for you

  C. Can I help you          D. Can you give me a hand

  ( )14. — Tomorrow is Saturday. Shall we go to the park?

      — ______

  A. Yes, we do.           B. No, we can't.

  C. Good luck!            D. Sure, that's a deal!

  ( )15. — Would you please carry the heavy bag for me?

  A. No problem!   B. What a pity!   C. Not at all.   D. Thank you.

  II. 完型填空 阅读短文,从各题四个选项中选出一个最佳答案,并将其代表字母填到题前括号内(共10分,每小题1分)

  Last Wednesday, Mr. Chen took his class to the Space Museum. There _16_ many things about space there. First, the children saw a film about space travel. They saw _17_ the space shuttle (航天飞机) took off in space and later landed on earth _18_. It was very exciting and the children felt they were traveling in space _19_!

 After the film, Mr. Chen took _20_ to see some models of rockets (火箭) _21_ the space shuttle. The models looked very real, but they were much _22_ . Then the children saw some moon rocks (岩石). Two _23_ landed on the moon in 1969. They put an American flag (旗) there. Then they took some rocks back to the _24_ .

  _25_ the children left, they also watched a video show about people living and working in a space lab. The people could stay in the space lab for months.

  ( )16. A.is    B.are      C.was      D.were

  ( )17. A.how    B.what     C.when     D.which

  ( )18. A.too    B.already    C.again     D.badly

  ( )19. A.itself  B.ourselves   C.oneself    D.themselves

  ( )20. A.their   B.them     C.they     D.theirs

  ( )21. A.or    B.but     C.and     D.then

  ( )22. A.small   B.smaller    C.big     D.bigger

  ( )23. A.Americans    B.Englishmen    C.Australians    D.Chinese

  ( )24. A.moon    B.star     C.earth     D.sun

  ( )25. A.After   B.As soon as  C.Until     D.Before

  阅读部分(共40分)

  III. 阅读理解

  A)根据短文的内容,从各题四个选项中选出一个最佳答案,并将其代表字母填到题前括号内(共20分,每小题1分)。

(A)

  JOLIN Tsai (蔡依林), a famous singer, has become an English teacher! But she is not staying in a classroom to give you talks in English. Instead, she has published (出版) a new book, "Jolin's English Diary Book". It came out in Taiwan in March. Jolin is helping you learn English in a light hearted way and give you useful words for life outside your textbooks.

  "I hope it's a happy English book," she said, "When you learn English in a fun way, you will keep on doing it." This certainly doesn't mean just reciting (背诵) words. Jolin has a lot of clever ways of learning. She likes to listen to English songs or find friends to talk to in English. She has been good at English since Grade 3 in primary school (小学). Because of this, she hosted (主持) news programme on the radio herself.

  Jolin knows it's important to put English to good use. So, in her English diaries, she wrote something about her everyday life, like study, fashion (时尚), travel and family. After each diary, she gives you lots of notea.You can use them often, too! Jolin also asks you to keep diaries like hers.

  ( )26. When did Jolin Tsai publish "Jolin's English Diary Book" ?

  A. In May    B. hi April   C. In March   D. In June

  ( )27. She has been good at English ___.

  A. since she became a famous singer B. since she was in Grade 3

  C. since she was in college (大学)  D. since she was 3 years old

  ( )28 Jolin thinks that ___ is important for us to learn English.

  A. just reciting words        B. hosting a programme on the radio

  C. studying in the classroom     D. putting English to good use

  ( )29. What's the meaning of "light-hearted" in the passage?

  A. 轻松愉快的  B. 漫不经心的  C. 迷迷糊糊的  D. 乐于助人的

  ( )30. From the passage we know that ____.

  A. she is not only a famous singer but also an English teacher in a primary school

  B. you don't have to keep English diaries

  C. she teaches us how to be a famous singer in "Jolin's English Diary Book"

  D. Jolin Tsai shows us how to learn English in a fun way

(B)

The highest bridge in the world

A bridge in France is the tallest in the world. It is 270 meters high and 2.46 kilometers long. The highest pillar- (桥墩) is 343 meters high, 23 meters higher than the Eiffel Tower (埃菲尔铁塔)

Beckham on the cover (封面) of Big
Comics Superior
《大漫画高手》

If you like football, you must know David Beckham. He is a famous football player from England. But do you know that he is on the cover of Big Comics Superior? Big Comics Superior is a magazine in Japan. Football can go around the world.

 

 

Year of Einstein (爱因斯坦年)

The Year of Einstein started in Germany to remember the 5Oth anniversary (周年) of Albert Einstein's passing away and 100th anniversary of the General Theory of Relativity (广义相对论). Einstein was born in Germany. He lived and taught in Germany from 1914 or 1933.

Building a bridge across the
straits (
海峡)

The Chinese mainland (大陆) and Taiwan have become closer
now after Taiwanese leaders' (领导人) visits and talks across the straits. On May 3, Kuomintang Chairman (国民党主席) Lien Chan finished his eight-day
visit to the mainland.

  ( )31. The Eiffel Tower is ___ high.

  A. 247 meters   B. 270 meters   C. 320 meters   D. 343 meters

  ( )32. Big Comics Superior is ___.

  A. a football player        B. a Japanese magazine

  C. a beautiful city         D. an English film

  ( )33. Where did the Year of Einstein start?

  A. In Germany   B. In America   C. In England   D. In France

  ( )34. How long did Lien Chan stay in the mainland?

  A. For three days.         B. For eighty days.

  C. For five days.          D. For eight days.

  ( )35. The four passages are probably from ___.

  A. instructions  B. newspapers   C. advertisements  D. dictionaries

(C)

  Hi, dear boys and girls! Do you know how to be a healthy kid? Here are some rules you should follow.

  First, eat different foods, especially fruit and vegetables. You may have a favourite food, but you'd better eat something different, if you eat different foods, you will probably get more nutrients (营养物质) your body needs.

  Second, drink water and milk as often as possible. When you're really thirsty, cold water is the No.l choice (选择). Milk is a great drink that can give you more calcium (钙) your body needs to grow strong bones (骨头).

Third, listen to your body. How do you feel when you are full? When you are eating, notice how your body feels and when your stomach (胃) feels comfortably full. Eating too much will not make you feel comfortable and make you fat.

  Fourth, limit (限制) screen time. Screen time is the time you watch TV, DVDs and videos, or using computers. It is good to take more exercise such as basketball, bike riding and swimming. You can't watch TV for more than two hours a day.

  Fifth, be active. One thing you'd like to do as a kid is to find out which activity you like best. Find ways to be active every day.

  Follow these rules and you can be a healthy kid.

  ( )36. You should eat different foods especially ___.

  A. meat   B. hamburgers   C. sweets     D. fruit and vegetables 

  ( )37. Which kind of drinks can give you more calcium?

  A. Juice  B. Milk      C. Cold water   D.Tea

  ( )38. According to (根据) the passage, you should follow __rules if you want to be healthy.

  A. five   B. nine      C. fifteen    D. thirteen

  ( )39. According to the passage, which of the following is TRUE?

  A. When you're eating, you don't have to notice how your body feels.

  B. You can eat your favourite food as much as possible.

  C. You can watch TV whenever you like to get more information.

  D. We should try to live in an active way in our life.

  ( )40. Which is the best title (标题) of the passage?

  A. How to make yourself important

  B. How to be a healthy kid

  C. How to be a popular kid

  D. How to make your parents healthy

(D)

 Chinese tsam first lands on Antarctic icecap peak (南极冰盖最高点)

  A 12-man Chinese team landed on the Antarctic icecap peak on January 18. They are the first people to reach the peak of Dome A (海穹A). It is 4,039 meters above sea level (海拔).

  The team built a station there to study the changes of the weather, get ice samples (标本) from 150 meters to 200 meters below, and do other studies. So far, the team has got nearly 100-meter long ice samples from a place about 300 meters under the icecap peak.

  It is the first time that people have been able to get samples from the icecap peak in Antarctica and it is very important for people to study the weather changes and environmental changes in this area(地区).

  The Chinese scientists have also built a weather study system (系统) at the peak. The system can send out information about temperature, how strong the wind is, and many other things about the weather.

  The Antarctic icecap makes up (组成) 70% of the earth's freshwater (淡水). By studying Dome A, scientists can get the lowest temperature of the earth and other information about the world's weather changes. We can't get this information from other places on the earth because Dome A is the best place for this kind of studies. So it is very important to land on the peak of Dome A.

  ( )41. How many Chinese first landed on the Antarctic icecap peak?

  A. 18     B. 12     C.150     D.200

  ( )42. The team has got about 100-meter long ice samples ___.

  A. from 150 meters to 200 meters below

  B. from a place about 300 meters below

  C. from 200 meters to 250 meters below

  D. from a place about 150 meters below

  ( )43.They built a weather study system to get ___.

  A. the earth's freshwater     B. ice samples from the peak

  C. information about the weather  D. the news about other countries

  ( )44. Choose thy right order (顺序) according to this passage.

  ① They built a station to study the changes of the weather.

  ② A Cliinese team landed on the Antarctic icecap peak.

③ The Chinese scientists built a weather study system.

  ④ They got ice samples from the icecap peak.

  A.②①④③    B.②①③④    C.③②①④    D.②③④①

  ( )45. From this passage, we can infer (推断): After the Chinese team landed on the Antarctic icecap peak, ___

  A. we can go there for holidays.

  B. the world's weather must be better and better.

  C. the peak will be the best place for people to live in.

  D. our country will do better in the world's weather research.

  B)根据短文内容完成研究性学习报告或简答图表后面的问题(共20分,每小题2分)。

(E)

  Animals are people's friends. But many wild (野生的) animals are facing (面临) the danger of dying out, because the environment that they are living in has changed greatly.

  For example, their living area (地区) has become smaller and smaller because of the development of cities and the increasing of population. They have no enough room to live in or enough food to eat. At the same time, men are trying their best to kill the animals just for getting their fur and skin (皮毛), teeth and meat.

  People should realize how serious it is and something should be done to protect the animals. We should build some nature reserves (自然保护区), so that animals can live freely. And people should not be allowed to kill the endangered (濒危的) animals or eat their meat.

  We should do something to make our world cleaner. Fresh (新鲜的) air, clean water and green grass are all important for animals. The death of the endangered animals will bring a disaster (灾难) to human beings.

Research Report

Many wild animals are facing the danger of 46     

Their living area has become smaller and smaller.

The important
things for
animals:
49     
___________
green grass

Nature reserves are needed.

There is no 47    for them.

The endangered animals shouldn't 50    

 

Their living area has become smaller and smaller.

The important
things for
animals:
49     
___________
green grass

Nature reserves are needed.

 

 

There is no 47    for them.

The endangered animals shouldn't 50    

 

 

Men are 48     to get their fur, skin, teeth and meat.

We should make the world cleaner.

(F)

注释

route:路线

glance: 浏览

service:服务

wheelchair access:轮椅通道

approximate:大致的

frequency:频率

  51. When is the first bus from Kingston?

  ________________________________________.

  52. When is the last bus from Heathrow Airport?

  ________________________________________.

  53. How often does the bus come between 7:30 to 9:30 on Saturday?

  ________________________________________.

  54. Can Mr.Brown take the bus to Kingston at one o'clock a.m. after he arrives at Heathrow Airport?

  ________________________________________.

  55. Can I take the bus if I'm on a wheelchair?

  ________________________________________.

  综合语言运用部分(共35分)

  IV. 根据上下文,用所给动词的正确形式填空(共10分,每小题1分)。

  56. If it ______ (not rain), we will go for a picnic.

57. Look at the children! They ______ (play) happily.

  58. Don't forget ______ (return) the book to Tom when you finish it.

  59. Our geography teacher once told us that the earth _______ (go) around the sun.

  60. He likes collecting all kinds of information. I often see him ______ (search) the Internet.

  61. Where is Mr.White? I haven't seen him for a few days.

    He ______ (go) to Hong Kong.

  62. — I'm too tired.

    — So am I. We'd better stop ______ (walk) and have a rest.

  63. — Do you like listening to popular songs?

    — Sure. My family ______ (be) all music lovers (爱好者).

  64. The summer holidays are coming. I ______ (fly) to Hainan Island with my parents.

  65. — Sally, your dress looks so nice! — Thank you. It _______ (make) of silk.

  V. 改写句子 在改写后的句中空白处填入一个适当的词,使该句意思与原句意思相同或相近(共10分,每空1分)。

  66. Jack is the tallest boy in our class.

    Jack is taller than _____ other _____ in our class.

  67. Mrs.Smith is busy now. She is doing her housework at home.

    Mrs.Smith is _____ _____ her housework at home.

  68. "Did you have a good sleep last night?" David asked Jim.

    David asked Jim _____ he _____ well last night.

  69. The motorbike cost him 8000 yuan last year.

    He _____ 8000 yuan _____ the motorbike last year.

  70. He came to the city two years ago.

    He ______ _____ in the city for two years.

VI. 补全对话 根据图示,在对话的空白处填入适当的话语(话语可以是句子、短语或词),使对话完整(共10分,每空1分)。

Mrs.Green doesn 't feel well. She goes to see a doctor. Now she is at the Information Desk.

  NURSE:   Have you registered (挂号) yet?

  MRS. GREEN: No, 71          .

  NURSE:    Do you know a doctor here?

  MRS. GREEN: Yes, I'm here to see Dr.Black.

  NURSE:    72          ?

  MRS. GREEN: I'm Cindy Green.

  NURSE:    Here's your patient's card (病志).

        Dr.Black is at Clinic (诊室) No. 3.

  MRS. GREEN: Mm, 73          ?

  NURSE:    Well ... walk ahead (前) and 74          .

        It's the second room on your right.

  MRS. GREEN: Thanks. (A few minutes later)

  Dr. BLACK: Hello, you're Cindy Green, right?

        Well, Mrs.Green, 75          ?

  MRS. GREEN: I had a headache and a cough this morning.

  Dr. BLACK: 76          ?

  MRS. GREEN: I'm feeling even worse. 77           this morning.It was 39℃.

  Dr. BLACK: 78           and say"Ah..." 79          .

         It's just a cold,take the medicine and drink more water, stay in bed

         for two days. I think you will get better soon.

  MRS. GREEN: 80          , Dr.Black.

VII. 短文填空 阅读短文,用方框中所给词或短语的正确形式填空,把答案写在文后横线上(共5分,每空1分)。

new, make, run, before long, one, cheap, since

  Adidas invented the world's _81_ smart (智能的) shoes called “Adidas I”. They have been put on sale (销售) _82_ April 1st. The company hopes that the new “Adidas I” will be popular with people. But they also worry whether people can afford it.

  Adidas says it takes them three years _83_ the new shoes. The “Adidas I” has a machine inside. It can adjust (调节) the shoes to the _84_. It can decide whether the shoes are too soft or firm (紧的). Batteries (电池) in the shoes can be good for 100 hours of running. Users can turn the shoes off to save battery life. When off, they're just like other sports shoes.

  Adidas' new shoes are the _85_ invention in the US sports business.

  81.______ 82.______ 83.______ 84.______ 85.______

  书面表达部分(共20分)

  VIII. 书面表达(共20分)

  A)假如你是Mike,出生于1992年6月25日。学校俱乐部要招收新会员,请根据个人特长进行选择,并用英文填写下表,词数30左右(共5分)。

Joining the 86       Clnb (Swimming,Drawing,
                Music,Footbal,
                   Basketball Violin…)

Please fill in your information here

The reasons(理由)you want to join the club

Name:   Mike

Birthday: 87__________     

Address: 10 Mathew Street USA

E-mail:  

88_____________________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

_______________________________________

  B)我们的情感是丰富多彩的,哪种情感会时常办随你呢?请参照下面的提示完成任务,词数60-80(共15分)。

Your Task (任务)

1.陈述你的观点。

2.举例支持你观点的论据和事例。

3.得出你的结论和感情。

在你完成任务的过程中,你可能会需要以下的词汇和问题提示:

1. Do you often feel happy (sad, angry, pleased, proud, lonely, worried, afraid...)?

2. Are there many things that make you happy (sad, angry, pleased, proud, worried, afraid...)? What are they? Why?

3. Is this kind of feeling good or bad for you? What can you learn from it?

4. What will you do in the future?

______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  ______________________________________________________________________________

  参考答案及评分标准

  I. 选择填空(共15分,每小题1分)。

  1-5 A B C D B   6-10 D C A C B   11-15 A B C D A

  II.完型填空 阅读短文,从各题四个选项中选出一个正确的答案(共10分,每小题1分)。

  16-20 D A C D B   21-25 C B A C D

  III.阅读理解(共40分)。

  A)根据短文的内容,从各题四个选项中选出一个正确的答案(共20分,每小题1分)。

  (A) 26-30 C B D A D      (B)31-35 C B A D B

  (C) 36-40 D B A D B      (D)41-45 B B C A D

  B)根据短文内容完成研究型学习报告或简答图表后面的问题(共20分,每小题2分)。

 (E) 46. dying out/disappearing

  47. enough room to live in and no enough food to eat/enough room and no enough food/enough room or food/enough room or enough food/enough room to live in or enough food to eat

  48. trying their best to kill the animals/trying their best

  49. fresh air, clean water

  50. be killed/be killed and their meat shouldn't be eaten

  (F)51. (It's) 4:51/0451

  52. (It's) 0:05/0005

  53. Every 10/ ten minutes/ mins /It comes every 10/ten minutes/mins.

  54. No/No, he can't/Of course not

  55. Yes/Yes, you can/Certainly/Of course/Sure

  评分标准:(E)、(F)两道题具有一定的开放度,如有能够满足试题语境的其它答案,评卷教师应该予以给分;有无句末标点符号均不扣分;该部分各小题若有单词拼写、字母大小写、标点或语法等错误,每小题中累计两个(含两个)扣1分,每小题扣分总数不超过2分;完全不对或不符合语境则不得分。

  VI. 用所给动词的适当形式填空(共10分,每小题1分)

  56. doesn't rain/does not rain   57. are playing   58. to return

  59. goes   60. search   61. has gone   62. walking   63. are

  64. will fly/am going to fly/am flying    65. is made

  评分标准:该部分若有单词拼写、语法错误,或完全不对,不符合语境等情况则不得分。

  V. 同义句转换 在改写后的句中填入一个适当的词,使该句意思与原句意思相同或相近(共10分,每空1分)。

  66. any ... boy/the... boys   67. busy doing/with   68. if/whether... slept

  69. paid...for/spent...on/spent... buying   70. has been/has stayed

  评分标准:本题具有一定的开放度,如有能够满足试题语境的其它答案,评卷教师应该予以给分;该部分各小题若有单词拼写、语法等错误,完全不对或不符合语境则不得分。

  VI. 补全对话(共10分,每空1分)。

 71. I haven't/I'm new here/ this is/it's the first time I come here / this is/ it's my first time (to come) here / I've come / I come here for the first time

  72. What's your name (, please)/ Your name (, please)/ May/Can I know/have your name/ Could you tell me your name/ Could you tell me what your name is

  73. where is Clinic No.3/how can I get to/ arrive at/reach Clinic No.3/which is the way to Clinic No.3/which way is to Clinic No.3/where is it

  can/could you tell/show me where Clinic No.3 is

  can/could you tell/show me how I can get to/arrive at/reach Clinic No.3

  can/could you tell/show me how to get to /arrive at/ reach Clinic No.3

  can/could you tell/show me which is the way to Clinic No.3/ which way is to Clinic No.3

  would you please tell/show me where Clinic No.3 is

  would you please tell/show me how I can get to/arrive at/reach Clinic No.3

  would you please tell /show me how to get to Clinic /arrive at/ reach Clinic No.3

  would you please tell /show me which is the way to Clinic No.3 /which way is to Clinic No.3

  74. turn left at the second turning /turn/ crossing/

  take the second turning /turn/ crossing on the left

  75. what's wrong with you/what's the matter /trouble with you

  what's your trouble/ what'up

  76. How are you feeling (now)

  77.1 took my temperature

  78. Open your mouth

  79. Nothing serious/There is nothing serious/There isn't anything serious/It's nothing serious

  There is nothing much wrong (with you)/Nothing much wrong/Don't worry

  80. Thank you (very much)/Thanks (a lot)/Many thanks

  评分标准:本题开放度较大,如有能够满足试题语境的其它答案,评卷教师应该予以给分;有无句末标号均不扣分;完全不对或不符合语境则不得分。该部分各小题若有单词拼写、字母大小写、标点或语法等错误,每小题中累计两个(含两个)扣1分,每小题扣分总数不超过1分;只错一处的小题进行大题累计,每两个(含两个)扣一分,整个大题只错一处不扣分。

  81. first 82. since 83. to make 84. runners 85. newest

  评分标准:该部分各小题若有单词拼写、标点或语法等错误,完全不对或不符合语境则不得分。

  VIII. 书面表达(共20分)

  A) 假如你是Mike,出生于1992年6月25日。学校俱乐部要招收新会员,请根据个人特长进行选择,并用英文填写下表,词数30左右(共5分)

  参考范例1:

Joining the 86 Swimming  Clnb (Swimming,Drawing,
                Music,Footbal,
                   Basketball Violin…)

Please fill in your information here

The reasons(理由)you want to join the club

Name:   Mike

Birthday: 87 June 25(th),1992
      / 25(th) June,1992

Address: 10 Mathew Street USA

E-mail:  

88 I want to join the swimming club
because swimming is my favourite sport.
I' m a little fat, swimming can help me
keep fit. It can make me healthy. And I
can make many friends there.

  评分标准:俱乐部及出生年月日各占一分,有单词拼写、字母大小写、标点或语法等错误,不得分。参加俱乐部原因占三分,单词拼写、字母大小写、标点或语法等错误,累计两个(含两个)不扣分;错两处以上的每增加一处扣一分(重复错误不累计),累计扣分不超过3分:完全不对或不符合语境则不得分。

  B) 我们的情感是丰富多彩的,哪种情感会时常伴随你呢?请参照下面的提示完成任务,词数
60--80(共15分)。

  参考范例:

  I often feel happy.(陈述自己的观点).There are many things that make me happy.(以下列举1—2个事例或论据,可以用一般现在时也可以叙述过去发生的事)For example,when I get presents I feel happy.It can make me feel that the people around me are friendly to me.When l help others l feel happy because helping others is to help myself.I'm happy every day.This kind of feeling is good for me,it can make me feel that the world is so beautiful,In the future,I want to be a happy girl.Do you have the same feeling as me? (得出结论和感悟)

  评分标准:

档 次

内 容

语 言 表 达

文字量

11-13分

内容丰富,根据要求分三个方面,层次清晰地完成任务。

具备较强的语言运用能力,表达清晰,基本没有语法、词汇等语言错误。

足够

8-10分

内容比较丰富,根据要求分三个方面,层次较清晰地基本上完成任务。

具备一定的语言运用能力,表达基本清晰,语法、词汇等语言错误较少。

足够

5-7分

未根据要求,未讲清主要内容,偏差较大, 层次不清,未完成任务。

不太具备语言运用能力,表达不够清晰,语法、词汇等语言错误较多。

略有不足

0-4分

未完成规定的任务,写了一些无关内容。

语法、词汇等语言错误太多,影响对内容的理解。信息未能传达给读者。

严重不足

  评分说明:

  1.语言错误包括:单词拼写、字母大小写、标点、语法等。

  2.语言错误扣分标准:错误在两处以内(含两处)不扣分;两处以上的,每增加一处
扣1分(重复错误不累计),累计扣分不超过3分。

  3.个人作文内容可与范文中的作文内容不同。